Sunday, May 18, 2008

Why you make me smile: a top 5 countdown

I have a top 5 for everything

It's hard to make a countdown for you

It's hard to count the things i think of

When i smile thinking of you

Five

Even when i want a real kiss

You kiss me on the forehead

It's protective and cute and

One of the first few things i think about

When i think of you

Four

You are just as mushy as I am

I can call you any pastry in the world

And you go along with it

Because you know it makes me smile

Three

The way you always grab my hand

You find it and Hold it

And it's yours

Two

That the night you asked me to be official you waited at the top of the subway stairs

When i looked back you were still there

One

The way our bodies magically fit when we snuggle

1 Comments:

At 9:36 AM , Blogger Lucy Doughty said...

this really spoke to me. and the structure is absolutely perfect!

 

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